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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: You Are Free
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: GenesseDate: 2004-10-28
Reviewid: 102780Chapter: 1
Oh, my. Very interesting story. I thought it was very powerful, with the symbols in the dream and all. Good job!

Reviewer: laurenDate: 2004-10-28
Reviewid: 102746Chapter: 1
Well, it made me cry. how about that?

Reviewer: St. MargaretsDate: 2004-10-16
Reviewid: 101565Chapter: 1
What a great dream sequence, Jem. At first I thought we were seeing the other side of the veil - but then it became more disjointed and I realized it was a dream. Just like you do sometimes when you are dreaming!

That was so sweet - the emotion you showed between James and Sirius - and I like how James echoed Dumbledore's words at the end of PoA - about how the dead never leave us.

Lovely.

Reviewer: JuluDate: 2004-10-15
Reviewid: 101497Chapter: 1
I was so excited to see your name here! I had high expectations and I was not disappointed.

Your imagery is wonderful. I loved the way you described the feeling of freedom in the night. I really sank into Sirius, which I don't normally do, but you did a beautiful job of finding his vulnerability. I also loved the way the story continues to twist so that you aren't really sure where it is going - then you find that you've come to a wonderful place at the end. Beautifully done.

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