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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: Kyla | Date: 2006-05-06 |
| Reviewid: 142565 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cute! neville and luna would be so good together. i didn't enjoy the image of neville naked, but i think that luna would be the kind of person that could really like neville. good story :) |
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| Reviewer: kelsy | Date: 2004-12-10 |
| Reviewid: 107414 | Chapter: 1 |
| heeheehee that was nice. havent read many Luna/Neville stories lately. this made me happy |
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| Reviewer: Casey | Date: 2004-10-25 |
| Reviewid: 102360 | Chapter: 1 |
| "I wonder if dragons realize that other things can't always see their own breath," is the best line I've ever read as said by Luna Lovegood. You have her down pat. A nice, sweet story here. I liked it. |
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| Reviewer: InFabula | Date: 2004-10-18 |
| Reviewid: 101773 | Chapter: 1 |
I really enjoyed this! I loved the part where Luna wonders whether dragons realise other creatures cannot always see their own breath: Luna is definitely someone who has the "time to stop and stare" at life.
A very engaging piece and Luna and Neville make a great couple. |
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| Reviewer: Genesse | Date: 2004-10-17 |
| Reviewid: 101663 | Chapter: 1 |
| You had me from the summary! Hilarious and well written, great characterization, romance... Just great! |
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| Reviewer: Ligia Elena | Date: 2004-10-16 |
| Reviewid: 101628 | Chapter: 1 |
| You've made these two seem perfect together! A sweet and funny story. I loved the journal entries. |
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| Reviewer: Lilac | Date: 2004-10-15 |
| Reviewid: 101553 | Chapter: 1 |
| Now THAT'S some good Neville/Luna! I need more canon to convince me of the possiblity, but this sure has me leaning more in that direction. :D |
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| Reviewer: Fireflash | Date: 2004-10-15 |
| Reviewid: 101529 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh! So cute! This made me just love Luna and Neville that much more. You write thoughtfully and also a little humorously (my favorite part: Nightclothes. Absent.). Luna shines through realistically here, which is hard to do, since we've seen so little of her.
Thanks for a great read on a rainy Friday! |
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| Reviewer: Don | Date: 2004-10-15 |
| Reviewid: 101496 | Chapter: 1 |
Lovely! I like the technique of using the journal to portray the tedium and to let us get a feel for the expedition, while leaving Neville's thoughts in a more personal vein.
Iliked this bit:
>>Neville, for the first time in his existence, seriously contemplated the meaning of the word throttle.<<
And this:
>>Location. Tent.
Speaker. Luna Lovegood.
Nightclothes. Absent.
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That has a great rhythm to it!
Finally both Neville and Luna are still in character but you have made them more endearing! I see why you've made it to the Bookshelf already! |
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