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Review(s): 7
| Reviewer: Chris | Date: 2005-01-07 |
| Reviewid: 110149 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, this was so cute! When Emma screamed, I think I gasped out loud while reading...not wanting her to scare the mice. What a great outtake from Kit's childhood! |
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| Reviewer: Aura Black Chan | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101917 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is so sweet! You should add to it, or do more out takes from Kits childhood! This is too good! |
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| Reviewer: Jutti | Date: 2004-10-16 |
| Reviewid: 101585 | Chapter: 1 |
| I loved it! As a child I brought all types of critters home, including frogs, snakes, and lizards. I was always getting in trouble at school over this. One time I collected about 10 toads on the way to school and put them in my lunch box with some nice moist dirt and grass. They got loose during recess and were hoping all over the classroom when we came in. The teacher was <b>not</b> amused! Fortunately my mum was more understanding! |
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| Reviewer: Alabaster Black | Date: 2004-10-15 |
| Reviewid: 101554 | Chapter: 1 |
Oooh, this is so cute!!! Mr. and Mrs. Whiskerton!!! I love it. People often have trouble growing up their characters but you've done a perfect job of growing Kit "down".....
<<"You're much more fun than my teddy, he never drinks the tea!">>
This was awesome! And I can't wait for the second chapter of Eshu's Daughter 2!!
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| Reviewer: Yolanda | Date: 2004-10-15 |
| Reviewid: 101506 | Chapter: 1 |
Hmm! I think this is great! Your descriptions of Kit as a cute little girl were perfect. Michael and Emma's reactions were fantastic. I could have spent hours watching my kid at that age.
I think you're more than ready for any mice tea parties that might happen in your own house! |
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