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Review(s): 26
| Reviewer: albusdumbledorerules | Date: 2007-07-30 |
| Reviewid: 148649 | Chapter: 1 |
| it was very interesting your idea about the 4 cores was very creative you are a great writer you should continue dumbledores life |
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| Reviewer: Kennard | Date: 2005-07-25 |
| Reviewid: 127804 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is the first story I have read on this site. I just found out about it and the six book just came out last week. Anyway, I think the story was great. Besides Harry of course, Dumbledore and Sirius Black are my favorite characters in the book. I especially liked it because of that fact. The story is cool. I think you should come out with one that gets more into how he became such a great wizard or dwell into the reason why Voldemort is scared (was scared shall I say, :( ....) of Dumbledore. The story was great, and you did a good job with Olivander! |
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| Reviewer: Marchpane | Date: 2005-05-11 |
| Reviewid: 121856 | Chapter: 1 |
| Great story! I love thinking of Dumbledore as a child. I really hope you write more about Dumbledore growing up, and when we know him. And I hope he and Oliver become friends! |
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| Reviewer: Lumos P. Nox | Date: 2004-12-31 |
| Reviewid: 109313 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was a wonderful story, and very well thought out. I enjoyed reading your interpretation of Dumbledore as a child because I have never thought of him that way. In my mind he has always been a brilliant old man. Its fun to think of his childhood, and you did a great job writing about it. I can't wait to read some more of your fics! |
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| Reviewer: Darker_Rage | Date: 2004-12-23 |
| Reviewid: 108476 | Chapter: 1 |
I do love wand stories!! *eyes go misty* Merlins Beard I read last...
Please please PLEASE Write more in this missing moment universe! You've set yourself up for masses of plots, and it doesn't do to keep the punters waiting :p
As to the writing it's self, you have the makings of a good author. Your ideas are thourough, and well thought through, and you write descriptively enough to paint the picture without putting the reader off.
Best of luck to future writings! |
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| Reviewer: Sue | Date: 2004-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 106616 | Chapter: 1 |
| This story is so well done! Nice idea about how Dumbledore and Fawkes first met. I really enjoyed it. Great first story! |
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| Reviewer: anna dagger | Date: 2004-11-09 |
| Reviewid: 103980 | Chapter: 1 |
| Exellent fic.I love the explanation for fawkes and Albus's ability to do wandless magic.Very very well written.You absolutly MUST write more of this.update soon.GOOD LUCK. |
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| Reviewer: Alice | Date: 2004-10-29 |
| Reviewid: 102831 | Chapter: 1 |
| Noway this is ur first story ! I can't belive it anyway good story way too good and I hope u could write more about Albus Dumbledore seems like no one really care's about is life alot I mean no one really writes about him so If u can would u do so and thanks alot for providing me with such a good Fan fic its teriffic! |
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| Reviewer: Catherine | Date: 2004-10-20 |
| Reviewid: 102003 | Chapter: 1 |
Nicely done! Excellent detail without too much, great characterization, and a very imaginative idea.
Thank you for a good read.
Catherine |
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| Reviewer: Liz | Date: 2004-10-20 |
| Reviewid: 101936 | Chapter: 1 |
Ooh, that was wonderful, it gave me the chills! It was very powerfully written and I really loved the ending. Your facts were just right so that they were believable and made sense! Great job!!
Liz |
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| Reviewer: Tina | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101920 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was really compelling. Please keep writing about Albus. I would really enjoy reading about him. |
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| Reviewer: Megan | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101894 | Chapter: 1 |
| Interesting ideas all around. Not sure I necessarily believe them, but hey, they're fun to think about! I would like to point out a couple of errors, though: First, phoenixes don't give birth, as such. They're birds, so they lay eggs. Yet, there's a myth that a phoenix dies after lying its egg, so that's close enough. Second, Florean Fortescue is contemporary with Harry, and not particularly old (I think), so it's highly unlikely there was a "Florean Fortescue" ice cream parlor when Dumbledore was a child. Anyway, these are both small nitpicks. I enjoyed the story overall. |
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| Reviewer: beck | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101888 | Chapter: 1 |
| I loved this story it was great i do hope you write more about albus and fawkes it would be really neat to hear how they grow up together and i loved your little joke about the wand being yew and holly keep up the great work hope to read more from you later on |
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| Reviewer: Fenris | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101872 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is such an original idea! I hope you do write some more Young Dumbledore stories. |
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| Reviewer: Martian | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101854 | Chapter: 1 |
I liked this. It's very enjoyable and covers a subject that's not often delved into (or even considered, I suspect). I would like to see further stories written about young Albus; It would provide a great writing opportunity I suspect, not only in terms of depicting Dumbledore himself but also the mid-nineteenth century wizarding world.
So, yeah. Good job on this and keep it up. |
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| Reviewer: Hekate | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101841 | Chapter: 1 |
| This story was just great! I really loved your young Dumbledore, you did a really great job of making him seem like a realistic eleven year old and yet still Dumbledore (if that makes sense). The creativity behind Fawkes and the Founders Wand is awesome. I will be watching for more of your work! |
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| Reviewer: Nundu | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101840 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a wonderful story. Well thought out and well written. Welcome to the Quill, and we expect great things from you! |
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| Reviewer: p0tterfan | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101819 | Chapter: 1 |
Good one. Nice what if scenario. I do wonder what the origins of Dumbledore were. Somehow I doubt we'll find out. JKR will probably leave it a mystery ... Ollivander's seems like one of those mysteries that we'd like to know more about too :)
Good job! |
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| Reviewer: Anjerla | Date: 2004-10-19 |
| Reviewid: 101794 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ohhhhhhhhh. I have goosebumps. This is fantastic. I'm definitely saving it somewhere. And I think that, despite the "lack of canon evidence", you did just fine, and I love the parallels with what we know will happen later in Albus' life, especially the wandless magic, phoenix feather, and the whole "linked with the castle" bits. Anyway, I love it. Thanks for sharing it with us! |
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