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Review(s): 16
| Reviewer: ReesesPieces | Date: 2005-07-02 |
| Reviewid: 125878 | Chapter: 1 |
| Well, the end seems a bit too cheery for the rest of the story-it should be something more bittersweet, but the rest of it was very good. |
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| Reviewer: Lady May | Date: 2005-01-09 |
| Reviewid: 110342 | Chapter: 1 |
That was amazing. I love the way you handled it so sensitively it didnt go overboard and ruin it. I'm not the biggest supporter in the world of R/S but I love reading R/S fics. Does that make sense? ^_^
I love how they dont take out the memories in the end. This was an original idea too, I like it.
I also think how you made Harry so understanding was great. "He didn’t know for sure his thoughts on this subject, but one thing he knew for certain: Anything that Uncle Vernon was opposed to, he was in favor of." That is exactly what Harry would think, I like your characterization of him. And the last line too was very Harry.
Good job! I hope to see more of your work soon. |
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| Reviewer: ... | Date: 2004-12-28 |
| Reviewid: 108960 | Chapter: 1 |
| im sorry i really am but i really really don't like people who make them gay its just wrong so i suggest u never write another story like this |
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| Reviewer: Goldfish | Date: 2004-11-13 |
| Reviewid: 104652 | Chapter: 1 |
omg, thats so sweet! im a nut-case over R/S! it just seems so, perfect! for them, i think they were! any story w/ a R/S shipp is great to me! I love it even though it's that though. its very very cute!
~Goldfishy |
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| Reviewer: Snuffle's Girl | Date: 2004-11-02 |
| Reviewid: 103267 | Chapter: 1 |
| Excellent one-shot, I really like the way Sirius and Remus get together. I also love the way you add humor into the story but don't make it cheesey. i think that Harry's character is very true to canon. Great Job! |
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| Reviewer: mel | Date: 2004-10-28 |
| Reviewid: 102769 | Chapter: 1 |
| Yeha it was cute, but please write more about them, they make the cutest couple, i think that its one of the best matches. I think that you portrayed remus and sirius well, but you should definatly write more more more more more :) |
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| Reviewer: beck | Date: 2004-10-26 |
| Reviewid: 102560 | Chapter: 1 |
| poor harry he just keeps getting more and more surprises hope you write more i would love to read it you wrote this one really well |
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| Reviewer: BookQueen604 | Date: 2004-10-26 |
| Reviewid: 102547 | Chapter: 1 |
Great story! My favorite line:
'Harry thought that if he could accept having an escaped Azkaban prisoner as a godfather, the fact that he had been gay and in love with a werewolf shouldn't surprise him.'
Sequel please! |
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| Reviewer: prplhez8 | Date: 2004-10-26 |
| Reviewid: 102515 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cute, cute, cute story. Wonderful angst for Harry and Lupin - two of my fave characters. Great characterization and tender poingnant moments. Way to go newbie!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Abi | Date: 2004-10-26 |
| Reviewid: 102497 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was really lovely. It's a nice touch, very beautiful writing. The concept and idea is very believable. Well done. |
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| Reviewer: Author by Night | Date: 2004-10-26 |
| Reviewid: 102456 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww, that was really cute! Remus/Sirius is a cute pairing. I can see Vernon being homophobic, though. :( Oh well, at least Harry isn't. |
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| Reviewer: Ms Morland | Date: 2004-10-26 |
| Reviewid: 102419 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is great! I really want to know how Harry's and Lupin's next conversation went. :) |
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