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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Decisions
Review(s): 5

Reviewer: jenDate: 2003-04-04
Reviewid: 26180Chapter: 1
I thought this story was very well done! Ginny is perfect!

Reviewer: GracieDate: 2003-02-16
Reviewid: 20583Chapter: 1
Umm, I don't mean to be negative, esp after reading your rave reviews, but this seems to me to need an awful lot of work. First, the plusses: Good possible plot, and some good dialogue. OK, here are my negatives: Really awkward use of adjectives. "His long slender legs poking out..." "Harry grimaced at her fanciful thoughts..." "she yelled indignantly..."

I see a lot of potential here, but you need to begin to practice writing EVERY DAY, in order to sound more natural, and to make it flow.
Best Wishes,and thanks for a good plot.

Gracie

Reviewer: MiliDate: 2002-10-12
Reviewid: 6047Chapter: 1
That was brilliant!

Reviewer: caitlinDate: 2002-08-19
Reviewid: 2546Chapter: 1
that wuz really good. i mean it. well, just keep on writing more and more stories like this one and u could be the next J.K.Rowling. i mean that to.!! i don't say that to everyone so be happy. i read these stories to see if any1 deserves a publisher!! no i;m not a publisher, but i know one who u could talk to if u answer me at cdrockin13@netscape.net( thats not true me knowing a publisher...sorry...but could u mail me anyway??;0

Reviewer: lilahpDate: 2002-08-06
Reviewid: 1091Chapter: 1
Nice sad little story. Thanks!

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