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| Reviewer: mary ellis | Date: 2005-08-01 |
| Reviewid: 128491 | Chapter: 2 |
Thanks for explaining the origin of the spells Voldemort used.
I liked your take on Arthur. Very touching and like him to meditate on his family during his vigil. Almost a litany, thinking of each child in turn, even Percy.
Yes, the second chapter needs work, but I bet now that HBP is out, you have a much better idea of the workings of Tom Riddle's mind. |
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| Reviewer: Taylor Woods | Date: 2005-07-16 |
| Reviewid: 127322 | Chapter: 2 |
| I thought that this chapter was incredibly interesting and always kept me on my toes. I did'nt want it to end! I love this chapter very much and can't wait till the next chapter is revealed!! |
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| Reviewer: Lizzie Brooks | Date: 2005-04-24 |
| Reviewid: 120472 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very creative and very believable because I thought that this was a JK Rowling site and that she wrote it. But when I found out you wrote it, I was apalled. Everything was believable, just, WOW! |
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| Reviewer: nightcrawler1089 | Date: 2004-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 103805 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like the fact that the story is in Arthur's perspective, and I look forward to the next chapter. A very good read, thank you! |
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| Reviewer: shiningstar | Date: 2004-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 103772 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow, that was a great start to the story. I like how you captured Arthur's character and how you showed us a clear picture of the love he has for his family. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2004-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 103735 | Chapter: 1 |
| I wasn't going to read this story, but something made me pause and give it a try and I'm glad I did. I love how Arthur works so hard, thinking about his family, to remain awake. You must be a parent because you included the fact that Arthur's fears are Molly's and only a parent would fear what she does. I'm looking forward to the second chapter. Please post soon. |
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