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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Beaker | Date: 2004-11-08 |
| Reviewid: 103868 | Chapter: 1 |
| Nicely done alternate-viewpoint piece! I like how you've captured Neville in transition--he is beginning to find a little personal strength and confidence, and you've given voice to his internal musings, both his securities and insecurities. Having him think about Hagrid as being less afraid because he's half giant is a nice touch. |
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| Reviewer: Author by Night | Date: 2004-11-08 |
| Reviewid: 103866 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love how you wrote Neville - he is very in character. I always cringe for him when I read Umbridge intimidating him like that in OoTP, and I felt even more bad there. He really is wise beyond his years. |
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| Reviewer: Laura | Date: 2004-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 103787 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was really good, no joke! Poor Neville. I really do hate that Umbridge woman. I like the background with Neville and his grandmother. And you should definitely write more stories, this one turned out so well! |
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| Reviewer: Kelida | Date: 2004-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 103737 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh dear is right! I just did the same thing, and left a glowing review under the other title -- whichever author, brilliantly done, and I hope the mishap gets sorted out quickly! |
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| Reviewer: Nundu | Date: 2004-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 103692 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh dear, I think there was some problem with the update. I just read this story credited to another author and titled "Everything Happens to Harry". I wondered about the title, but loved the story, whichever one of you wrote it! |
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