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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2004-11-10 |
| Reviewid: 104149 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was funny! Was the Loony girl Luna, by any chance? Just checking. I loved Draco’s cynical callous tone… he’s such a brat, I love him. And all the little details- Draco force feeding house elves disgusting flavour beans, and Pansy trying to spit out her pudding and look lady- like at the same time… I liked Blinky too. It’s funny I never thought that the Malfoy’s would have more than one Elf but I guess it’s quite probable… extremely probable if they’re in to throwing parties. Great piece, keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: Purple Eyed Weasley | Date: 2004-11-09 |
| Reviewid: 104001 | Chapter: 1 |
That was pretty good. Great ending, with Luna being there.
I felt really sorry for Draco in this story. You made me really see into his inner goodness, and how he was tortured as a small child.
Great job. |
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