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Review(s): 15
| Reviewer: wee mee | Date: 2005-01-04 |
| Reviewid: 109655 | Chapter: 1 |
| it was like, i knew i thought it was supposed to be about harry, but it was ambiguous so i knew it wasn't about harry, and the surprise ending was a surprise, but one i was expecting.... you know.... like the ususal suspects. |
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| Reviewer: Carly | Date: 2004-11-29 |
| Reviewid: 106294 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow. Just, just... wow! That was so awesome. I totally thought it was Harry, but then....“Oh, Ron!” Ginny moaned, “I miss you so much.” All I have to say is wow. I love that. It's really good. You have this escellent way of making people think something and them BAM! It's something else. That is a really wondeful writing technique that I wish I could have. I just have one question, are you going to write more? OK well, good luck with that if you are. You are a great writer!
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| Reviewer: ThePurplePlatypusThatRules (Anonnymous) | Date: 2004-11-27 |
| Reviewid: 106156 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aaaawwwww. But you'd never know it was Ron. You where probably going for that, weren't you? My friend would break her comp. if she saw this. |
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| Reviewer: DrSmurf | Date: 2004-11-21 |
| Reviewid: 105423 | Chapter: 1 |
| OOh, I like the ending! I was not going to review when I thought it was Harry- way too predictable, then I thought, wait, this is the SQ, they're good about putting up good fics, and I was pleasantly surprised- keep it up! |
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| Reviewer: CheddarTrek | Date: 2004-11-20 |
| Reviewid: 105346 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow, I liked the ending (the bit about it being Ron and not Harry). I am not a big H/G shipper, and this seemed like another "Mourn for Harry, Ginny" fic until the end, but I could really see the bond between Brother and Sister becoming ever so much closer after that battle.
Great Job. |
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| Reviewer: Annie | Date: 2004-11-19 |
| Reviewid: 105235 | Chapter: 1 |
| that's so sad. I thought you were writing about Sirius all the way through. Then Ginny says Ron. I liked it though. |
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| Reviewer: Author by Night | Date: 2004-11-19 |
| Reviewid: 105231 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was so sad - and I like how you never said who it was until the end. And I liked all the examples you used. The only thing I would suggest is that you try not to use as many metaphors. |
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| Reviewer: sweetie | Date: 2004-11-19 |
| Reviewid: 105222 | Chapter: 1 |
OH MY GOD! you totally fooled me! i thought this was all about Harry until that heartwrenching last line. *sniff* i really hope JK doesn't get any ideas from this fic. really beautiful! well done!
luv sweetie |
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| Reviewer: Gail | Date: 2004-11-19 |
| Reviewid: 105218 | Chapter: 1 |
| Excellent short story (or first chapter, I am not sure)! I totally thought she was talking about Harry until I reached the last line. Nice twist! |
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