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| Reviewer: Katie Bilius | Date: 2006-02-11 |
| Reviewid: 139675 | Chapter: 1 |
I like this story a lot, however, I know that Dumbledore would never have said "mudbloods" and you kept refering to Dumbledore in different ways and it got confusing. This story is very well written, I just don't think it's nnot as close to canon as it could be.
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| Reviewer: Erica | Date: 2004-11-28 |
| Reviewid: 106184 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hmm...It seems rather choppy, but it's quite interesting, this "inside view" of Percy. I'm not too sure about how in-character Dumbledore's reaction to him is though- or does Dumbledore know something we don't know? Or not...I don't know, but I enjoyed it. :-D |
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| Reviewer: Jenni | Date: 2004-11-27 |
| Reviewid: 106124 | Chapter: 1 |
| Interesting idea for a story, although I'm not sure how close to canon it really is. But I'd be interested to see more! |
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