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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: What If
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-02-13
Reviewid: 139760Chapter: 1
Nice

Reviewer: Katie BiliusDate: 2006-02-11
Reviewid: 139675Chapter: 1
I like this story a lot, however, I know that Dumbledore would never have said "mudbloods" and you kept refering to Dumbledore in different ways and it got confusing. This story is very well written, I just don't think it's nnot as close to canon as it could be.

Cheers

Reviewer: EricaDate: 2004-11-28
Reviewid: 106184Chapter: 1
Hmm...It seems rather choppy, but it's quite interesting, this "inside view" of Percy. I'm not too sure about how in-character Dumbledore's reaction to him is though- or does Dumbledore know something we don't know? Or not...I don't know, but I enjoyed it. :-D

Reviewer: JenniDate: 2004-11-27
Reviewid: 106124Chapter: 1
Interesting idea for a story, although I'm not sure how close to canon it really is. But I'd be interested to see more!

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