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| Reviewer: Beaker | Date: 2005-05-11 |
| Reviewid: 121872 | Chapter: 1 |
| That's a fun little missing moment! Thanks for posting it. Love Fred's sudden discomfort when he realizes the situation he's in, comforting Angelina...hee hee hee... |
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| Reviewer: Frankie B | Date: 2004-12-28 |
| Reviewid: 108957 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love it when people can show a believably softer side to one of the twins, especially Fred, and you have done an admirable job with this fic! Very, very well done! |
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| Reviewer: madame en | Date: 2004-12-08 |
| Reviewid: 107211 | Chapter: 1 |
| I've been a bit backlogged in my reading and just discovered this fic. Nice characterizations and a point of view of canon events that is original and charming. I hope you write more soon- Weasley Twins fic is always a good thing, especially when they are explored as characters and not just as comic relief. ;o) |
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| Reviewer: Madeleine | Date: 2004-12-03 |
| Reviewid: 106756 | Chapter: 1 |
Awww... wonderful characterisation. Very wel written.. just.. just *great*. I never thought of it before but Angelina must have found Wood a hard act to follow. And I love seeing this new side to Fred; those two seem so right together. My favorite quote:
" Angelina, who could be more manic than Oliver over Quidditch. Angelina, who could throw a punch that Charlie couldn’t top. Angelina, who fit against him perfectly during the last slow song of the Yule Ball. "
Great stuff! |
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| Reviewer: hairy_hen | Date: 2004-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 106628 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hey, this is really good! Definitely how I can see the two of them reacting to what happened. I like how you mentioned the memory of the Yule Ball, and had Fred stick around instead of leaving, even though her crying obviously made him uncomfortable. Nicely done. |
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| Reviewer: shiningstar | Date: 2004-12-01 |
| Reviewid: 106487 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awww...that was such a sweet fic. I love stories like this. Can't wait to read more of your writings. |
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| Reviewer: BogglemindFG | Date: 2004-12-01 |
| Reviewid: 106404 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is a really great start! (At least I hope it's a start...) I love Gred and Forge, and Angelina too, and Fred and Angelina are really in character here. It's not often that you see that in a fic. I love this new side of Fred. Your writing style is also really good. CONTINUE! |
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