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Review(s): 10
| Reviewer: Amanda | Date: 2004-12-29 |
| Reviewid: 109107 | Chapter: 1 |
I don't think that I have ever seen anybody use Murder as a way to get things fluffy. Not that that's a bad thing... Cute story, I loved it!
Insquequo terminus,
amanda |
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| Reviewer: Abigail | Date: 2004-12-03 |
| Reviewid: 106787 | Chapter: 1 |
Nice story! I liked it very much, I think you managed to portray a cute/romantic moment without being melodramatic or anything of the sort... I looooved the idea of Hermione's costume! You sure made me laugh!
It doesn't sound exactly like something that would actually happen in the books, but one is allowed to dream, right? Congrats and keep writting.
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| Reviewer: Nic | Date: 2004-12-03 |
| Reviewid: 106759 | Chapter: 1 |
That was fantastic! You really had me laughing out loud in the first paragraph, just imagining Hermione in her costume was hilarious!
It was really well written, very funny and very sweet. |
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| Reviewer: nightcrawler1089 | Date: 2004-12-01 |
| Reviewid: 106456 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ooh, very interesting. I liked the plot, and how you included the game. However, I think you transitioned between "Harry-unsure of his feelings" and "Harry-loving-Ginny." Oh well...still a great story. Thanks! |
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