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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 18

Reviewer: MelDate: 2005-09-12
Reviewid: 132370Chapter: 1
Heehee! This is too cute ^^

Reviewer: BlankDate: 2005-01-23
Reviewid: 111833Chapter: 1
LOL. That was sooo funny. It definetly made me smile.
>>I left a tad early, hohoho,
And Im on a diet look, just let me go!<< XD
>>So why are you early? Patrick asked.
Did you do what Mummy does, and multi-task?
Fred blinked. I suppose so, yes.<< XDD
I'm quite fond of the reference to multi-tasking.

Reviewer: readerDate: 2005-01-09
Reviewid: 110335Chapter: 1
cute

Reviewer: Frankie BDate: 2004-12-28
Reviewid: 108966Chapter: 1
Oh, that was priceless. Absolutely sweet of Fred to do that for the kids, and nicely told as well. Great job!

Reviewer: SueDate: 2004-12-23
Reviewid: 108332Chapter: 1
Nice job! So clever, and it flows so well. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Aura Black ChanDate: 2004-12-22
Reviewid: 108318Chapter: 1
This is dead brilliant! I loved Fred as 'Father Christmas'! Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: TrulyDate: 2004-12-22
Reviewid: 108300Chapter: 1
hahathe last line was the best! not too bad a poem parody! :P

a bit confusing with the children (maybe u could state the family/timeframe situation in the summary?) and fred suddenly appearing when i thought it was really santa. but other than that i liked it, made me smile. thanks!

Reviewer: beckDate: 2004-12-22
Reviewid: 108299Chapter: 1
very cute =) Merry Christmas

Reviewer: PugpalDate: 2004-12-22
Reviewid: 108291Chapter: 1
ROFLOL! oh...oh. I can't breath, I'm laughing so hard. That last line was what did me in!

Reviewer: ArnelDate: 2004-12-22
Reviewid: 108290Chapter: 1
I've seen many versions of this poem, but this is the first Harry Potter version I've seen. You've done a cute job and I really enjoyed your creativity.

Reviewer: Shina LarisDate: 2004-12-22
Reviewid: 108281Chapter: 1
This is such a wonderful piece of work. I really enjoyed reading it. :)

Reviewer: Annie_jayeDate: 2004-12-22
Reviewid: 108277Chapter: 1
That was so cute! I loved it.

Reviewer: ValaDate: 2004-12-22
Reviewid: 108266Chapter: 1
This is great! I couldn't do anything like that. It is very difficult for me. My only quip is where is George? You never see Fred without George. Though maybe I am reading too much into it ^^;;;

Reviewer: AstridDate: 2004-12-21
Reviewid: 108245Chapter: 1
Awww, that's sweet.

Reviewer: KarenDate: 2004-12-21
Reviewid: 108244Chapter: 1
Very sweet... You need to follow up with more. Poor (Uncle) Fred...

Reviewer: robertDate: 2004-12-21
Reviewid: 108243Chapter: 1
A truly precius and funny retelling. Kudos on a job well done.

Reviewer: DelleveDate: 2004-12-21
Reviewid: 108234Chapter: 1
That was adorable. I love the idea as Fred as Santa Claus. Hee...

Reviewer: KatieDate: 2004-12-21
Reviewid: 108230Chapter: 1
Cute. Love it!

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