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| Reviewer: Blank | Date: 2005-01-23 |
| Reviewid: 111833 | Chapter: 1 |
LOL. That was sooo funny. It definetly made me smile.
>>“I left a tad early, hohoho,
And I’m on a diet – look, just let me go!”<< XD
>>“So why are you early?” Patrick asked.
“Did you do what Mummy does, and multi-task?”
Fred blinked. “I suppose so, yes.<< XDD
I'm quite fond of the reference to multi-tasking. |
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| Reviewer: Frankie B | Date: 2004-12-28 |
| Reviewid: 108966 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, that was priceless. Absolutely sweet of Fred to do that for the kids, and nicely told as well. Great job! |
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| Reviewer: Aura Black Chan | Date: 2004-12-22 |
| Reviewid: 108318 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is dead brilliant! I loved Fred as 'Father Christmas'! Happy Holidays! |
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| Reviewer: Truly | Date: 2004-12-22 |
| Reviewid: 108300 | Chapter: 1 |
hahathe last line was the best! not too bad a poem parody! :P
a bit confusing with the children (maybe u could state the family/timeframe situation in the summary?) and fred suddenly appearing when i thought it was really santa. but other than that i liked it, made me smile. thanks! |
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| Reviewer: Pugpal | Date: 2004-12-22 |
| Reviewid: 108291 | Chapter: 1 |
| ROFLOL! oh...oh. I can't breath, I'm laughing so hard. That last line was what did me in! |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2004-12-22 |
| Reviewid: 108290 | Chapter: 1 |
| I've seen many versions of this poem, but this is the first Harry Potter version I've seen. You've done a cute job and I really enjoyed your creativity. |
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| Reviewer: Vala | Date: 2004-12-22 |
| Reviewid: 108266 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is great! I couldn't do anything like that. It is very difficult for me. My only quip is where is George? You never see Fred without George. Though maybe I am reading too much into it ^^;;; |
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