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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: louisa | Date: 2005-01-06 |
| Reviewid: 110014 | Chapter: 1 |
| Teenagers, huh! Your onto something here, are you going to continue this with other characters? (This is the bit where you nod and say "yeah, I'm posting a new one tomorrow") |
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| Reviewer: Morag Camshron | Date: 2005-01-03 |
| Reviewid: 109608 | Chapter: 1 |
I enjoyed this ficlet; the idea of Ron trying to become “beautiful” is just too sad and funny.
- Morag Camshron |
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| Reviewer: Sue | Date: 2004-12-28 |
| Reviewid: 108880 | Chapter: 1 |
| Nice job! I look forward to reading the next chapter(s). Good description of how Ron must feel being one brother in a family full of Weasley boys, and good description of Harry, too! Well done and I really enjoyed it. |
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| Reviewer: Teena | Date: 2004-12-28 |
| Reviewid: 108869 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very nice! I love how they're not described as traditionally beautiful--it's much better this way, imo. |
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| Reviewer: emily | Date: 2004-12-27 |
| Reviewid: 108846 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very cute! Loved it! Are you going to be writing a series of characters? Can't wait for more! |
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| Reviewer: prplhez8 | Date: 2004-12-27 |
| Reviewid: 108784 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a lovely, lovely, lovely first time story. I was just enthralled. Am a BIG bridget jones fan and that ...just as you are...line killed me. What person wouldn't love that line thrown at them, to be loved just as they are. Hermione and Ron are a perfect example of loving someone just as they are. You have done a wonderful job of teenage characterization, especially for these two bundle of nerves. Great job newbie!!! |
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| Reviewer: Gabriella Du Sult | Date: 2004-12-27 |
| Reviewid: 108776 | Chapter: 1 |
| Not to be obvious, but -- Beautiful! Loved it. You have Ron's insecurities down pat and proved Hermione's Gryffindor spirit. Looking forward to more chapters and future POV's if that is your plan. |
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