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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: Reader2Date: 2005-03-07
Reviewid: 115762Chapter: 1
Quite good. Ready for more.

Reviewer: Amiable DorsaiDate: 2005-01-07
Reviewid: 110040Chapter: 1
Nice.

I think you've captured Vernon pretty well. Obsessed by money and status, the worst thing his subconcious can come up with is a Harry who wears odd t-shirts, and a Voldemort who will wreck his stock portfolio.

I think he may be in for a shock, one day.

Having Harry get an epiphany from a dream talk with Vernon is a very nice touch.

Reviewer: LoriDate: 2005-01-06
Reviewid: 109919Chapter: 1
Very funny fic - with a nice twist at the end (Harry & Vernon invading each other's dreams). I especially liked Harry's sonic boom Apparating noises and Dudley's aborted attempt to eat the transfigured remote.

Your story was clear enough that your author's note wasn't really necessary. Well done.

Reviewer: JenDate: 2005-01-05
Reviewid: 109849Chapter: 1
Wow! I haven't read many stories where the Dursleys are treated decently. Thank you. I like how you showed their fear of magic, but allowed Vernon to slowly accept its usefulness, its necessity if Voldemort ever came to power and how that would effect his day-to-day life. Great job! I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: marcellaDate: 2005-01-05
Reviewid: 109788Chapter: 1
I did a double-take at your name, thought it was mine. Continue to post here, I'd like to read more of your work.

Reviewer: Aura Black ChanDate: 2005-01-04
Reviewid: 109763Chapter: 1
This is great, I loved it! Harry's turning the remote into several different small objects right in front of Vernon was priceless! So was his indifferent attitude towards Vernon's reaction to the magic he was doing in the house! I loved the t-shirt descriptions, and how Harry had come up with a thrifty way of getting like-new jeans.

Reviewer: Tejano CeylonDate: 2005-01-04
Reviewid: 109725Chapter: 1
I liked this! It's a good analysis of what powers Harry has that Voldemort doesn't, and is amusing at the same time with Uncle Vernon's reactions. Nicely written- please write more short stories!

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