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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Reader 2 | Date: 2006-12-25 |
| Reviewid: 146606 | Chapter: 1 |
Some things just take time. Hopefully this will be worth the wait.
What can be worth this long a wait? |
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| Reviewer: Emily | Date: 2005-09-20 |
| Reviewid: 132924 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very well done, just one part that was a little confusing...the sudden switch to Lily and the others who were dead. Maybe if you italicized it or put some ***'s right before it, it would be a little more clear. Otherwise, very nice job! |
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| Reviewer: Blank | Date: 2005-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 112279 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like it. I love the PoV and the idea of how the dead can still watch and see the living. I also love Moody's line >>Mundungus, kindly return the goblet from your left pocket to its rightful place on the sideboard<< LoL, very much like Moody. Great job! |
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| Reviewer: nightcrawler1089 | Date: 2005-01-14 |
| Reviewid: 110825 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very, VERY touching story. Brilliant idea...although I'm not formally requesting one, have you thought about a sequel where Harry is alone in the room immediately after this...but Lily is there too? Amazing read. |
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| Reviewer: Gillian | Date: 2005-01-12 |
| Reviewid: 110608 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awesome job! I loved it! Aw poor Lily how heartbreaking, she can see what Harry's going through but she can't help him! Aww! Post some more soon! I love!! |
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