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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Enter Scabbers
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: Emma GraceDate: 2004-01-14
Reviewid: 67012Chapter: 1
Oooh, that's really good. I adore Little Weasley stories, and this fits into Wormtail's character perfectly...he's such a...such a...snivelling little coward!

Reviewer: FionaDate: 2003-10-05
Reviewid: 55555Chapter: 1
I wanted this to be longer! It's funny that Percy had to keep Scabbers away from Ron, and yet he ended up as Ron's pet! Did the rat feel second-best when Percy got his owl?

Reviewer: Violet AzureDate: 2003-03-16
Reviewid: 24170Chapter: 1
Excellent opening, bookending it with the "he ran" line. It really pulls the audience in on those first 2 words.

So cute! Little Percy knowing *exactly* how a degnoming should go! And it was so sweet of Percy to want to take care of the hurt rat! So often people overlook Percy's kind nature, like his concern for his siblings, but you worked that in nicely.

[Despite most everyone's firm belief that he was useless, he had always been pretty good at healing his own minor cuts and scrapes.] This line is both sad and yet it reveals a *lot* about Peter's character. Not only does it express his frustration at being underestimated, but it also says a lot about his insecurities, his need to be recognized for something, even in the midst of fleeing.

[The rat part, on the other hand, insisted that he was hungry, and considering his current condition, the rat part won out] Ha! Great dry humor! I love that ever so British, dry, side-remark type of humor.

["Not on the table, dear," said Mrs. Weasley, without turning to look.] That's so Molly; she doesn't miss a thing, does she?

An excellent ficlet that fleshes out an important canon plot point. I'm glad someone took the time to write this. This was a really nice piece.

Reviewer: B. NonymousDate: 2002-11-18
Reviewid: 9463Chapter: 1
Another gem.

I'd be interested knowing your take on what Peter meant by saying:
"But Weasleys..."

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