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Review(s): 10
| Reviewer: bennedetto | Date: 2007-02-23 |
| Reviewid: 147283 | Chapter: 1 |
Short but sweet.
Very well written--I especially love the italicized thoughts going on between Remus and Snape during the conversation.
Brilliant work. |
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| Reviewer: Poppy P | Date: 2005-10-25 |
| Reviewid: 135132 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a fitting tribute to Sirius; Remus returning to the Shrieking Shack where it all started. This was very sad, but I found myself smirking during the Snape/Remus exchange. That was very clever. Another beautiful piece :) |
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| Reviewer: MicroFatCat | Date: 2005-03-31 |
| Reviewid: 118261 | Chapter: 1 |
*grins whilst reading the conversation between Snape*
The only way (if I'd've written this) would've been to make it longer, and in the 1st person:)
Why is the moon 'empty'?
Micro xx |
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| Reviewer: Alphie | Date: 2005-01-21 |
| Reviewid: 111633 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh wow. I simply LOVE the itallics converstaion going on between Remus and Snape. Just wonderful. |
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| Reviewer: lazywitch | Date: 2005-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 111207 | Chapter: 1 |
| I enjoyed this story. I am not generally fond of short stories, but this one was to the point and touching. The dialouge between Snape and Lupin was well done, especially the thoughts. |
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| Reviewer: prplhez8 | Date: 2005-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 111202 | Chapter: 1 |
Well, well done. I have always had a soft spot for professor Lupin. And oft wonder what his reaction to Sirius' passing will be. You have done a wonderful job of Remus' controlled charaterization.
He felt the transformation beginning and for once, he welcomed the physical agony as his body twisted itself into a new but familiar form. The pain was a reflection of the grief in his heart.
-that part made my heart ache.
Sirius had bounded back into his life washing away much of the hurt and removing the stark longing to belong. He had been happy.
-as did this.
You have done a great job in capturing the times in between, the missing moments. Job well done! |
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| Reviewer: Nundu | Date: 2005-01-16 |
| Reviewid: 111055 | Chapter: 1 |
"he wanted the luxury of being able to lose his mind"
This sentence really says it all. Well written, and so sad. |
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