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Review(s): 12
| Reviewer: MagicDust | Date: 2005-11-26 |
| Reviewid: 136329 | Chapter: 1 |
I loved this peice, I remmeber reading it a while back. You hacve always had very excellent stories.I had a couple of FAVORITE parts. When Remus was transforming, and and you and the lyrics to the book/rhyme, I thought that made it extra great!And the ending:
"I see the moon, and the moon sees me. God bless the moon, and … Mama? Mama, what’s the matter, Mama? Why are you crying? Mama?"
Mama was hugging him tightly, and her tears fell onto Remus’ cheeks and hair.
And Remus couldn’t understand why. <CENTER>
I thought that was really good/well done.You always do an excellent job oon your stories. So, *takes out 5 butterbeers* great job!
Cheers,
-MagicDust |
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| Reviewer: Lord James | Date: 2005-08-09 |
| Reviewid: 129384 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is easily the best of all your works. The only problem is the </CENTER> thigs. |
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| Reviewer: Wormy | Date: 2005-08-01 |
| Reviewid: 128381 | Chapter: 1 |
| Little Remus was so cute...I loved it. It was really sad, but it was well-written and the POV was amazing. |
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| Reviewer: Katie | Date: 2005-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 125052 | Chapter: 1 |
That was an absolutely perfect way to describe Lupin as a boy...especially the way that he becomes a werewolf. Great job!
Katie |
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| Reviewer: Anya | Date: 2005-04-22 |
| Reviewid: 120328 | Chapter: 1 |
| I always love stories told from the POV of a charachter in their young childhood, this was very bittersweet! |
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| Reviewer: Snuffles | Date: 2005-01-26 |
| Reviewid: 112153 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awwww *Sniffles* poor Remus. Bless his heart. Great story but really sad. *More sniffles* |
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| Reviewer: Liza | Date: 2005-01-25 |
| Reviewid: 112024 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, that was sweet and so sad. I think I have read a fic that used that little rhyme in it before so for a moment I had a little deja-vu... but then it went in a different direction... I love it. Good work. |
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