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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 5

Reviewer: Angelina WeasleyDate: 2005-05-16
Reviewid: 122143Chapter: 1
Alright, I read this fic BEFORE I read 'The Promise Ring', which is brilliant, by the way. But... my first time reaction to this was: WHAT ARE YOU ON?????? LILY, a Slytherin? But I've calmed down now. You know, now that JKR has said that something huge will be revealed about Lily in book 6, I really DO think that she might have been a Slyth. Huh.
Peter Pettigrew is a hugely complicated character, as far as characters go in the Potterverse. Questions like "How the HELL did he become a Gryffindor?'' and "Why did he betray the Potters?" have been asked frequently, and your story, brilliantly written, has (sort of) answered them. Peter's PoV must have been extremly hard to write, because, as I said before, he's complicted. You did a phenomenal job, though.
Congratulations. Can't wait for that sixth year fic.
Angelina Weasley.

Reviewer: reader23Date: 2005-02-19
Reviewid: 114381Chapter: 1
You know, I think Peter is the most complicated character to figure out. How was he in Griffindor, what were his motives in betrying the Potters?
You were really brave to try to imagine a good history for him- this has got to be the most credible one yet.
Congrats on an awesome story!
PS: really looking forward to the 6th year fic!!

Reviewer: reader2Date: 2005-02-14
Reviewid: 113890Chapter: 1
doubt

Reviewer: GryfnyDate: 2005-02-14
Reviewid: 113886Chapter: 1
I've been in middle of your longer fic for a while. And it's really good. I like your little one shot from Pettergrew's PoV, his recalling the actions he has taken in the past. Very well written.

I can't wait to read you sixth year fic..

Reviewer: BabuneDate: 2005-02-12
Reviewid: 113746Chapter: 1
This is such a neat default. I really liked it. Maybe Peter was put in Gryffindor for a reason after all. So cool. Normally you would think he's the bad guy. I like how the story makes him seem good. He redeamed himself. That's really cool. Keep writting.

*Babune

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