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Review(s): 17
| Reviewer: Rachel | Date: 2005-05-23 |
| Reviewid: 122633 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow, I had to write a review on this story. I was having a very terrible, mellow-dramatic day! Not feeling the greatest about anything. But then I read this story. Leave it to the relations of these four Hogwarts students to leave me with a grin on my face for the rest of the day! Thanks, your writting skilld are quite splendid. "Elephant!" that was a great line ;) |
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| Reviewer: louisa | Date: 2005-05-22 |
| Reviewid: 122592 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ohhhh, *girly squeals*, lovely. I love Ron blurting out 'elephant', thank goodness our Hermione's too smart to take offense (It always annoys me when fic authors make her super-sensitive). More of your lovely romantic stuff please. |
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| Reviewer: Katja | Date: 2005-05-22 |
| Reviewid: 122574 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ooh, that was great. So many interwoven threads, and (almost) all tied up cleverly! (I hope Harry's won't be in too much trouble...) |
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| Reviewer: Sonic | Date: 2005-05-21 |
| Reviewid: 122560 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow. Normally, I don't read unadulterated fluff, but...
your fluff is fluffier than the fluffiest fluff. And I mean that in a good way. :) |
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| Reviewer: Angelina Weasley | Date: 2005-05-18 |
| Reviewid: 122393 | Chapter: 1 |
"An elephant!"
Ron...ronronron...
Don't you just want to pick him up and SQUEEZE him?
Though.. that would be kinda hard...
I love this story. Really, I do. |
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| Reviewer: Jaclyn | Date: 2005-05-18 |
| Reviewid: 122353 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww! That was so cute. The ending was great to! "Can I borrow a sickle?". I really like how you seemed in tuned to all of the charactors attitudes. I also really liked the elephant idea, no girl would want to turn into an elephant, bcause they weigh a ton, but thats like the first thing ron thinks of, for the most innocent of reasons too :). Great job. |
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| Reviewer: nightcrawler1089 | Date: 2005-05-17 |
| Reviewid: 122250 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ba-dum-dum-Chh! Classy ending and a nice story--it was a pleasure reading it. Thanks :-) |
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