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Reviews for: The Bet
Review(s): 17

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-01-16
Reviewid: 138596Chapter: 1
Wonderful humorous reading time well spent.

Reviewer: mpsDate: 2005-06-02
Reviewid: 123198Chapter: 1
Really good! i love it.

Reviewer: eden chubbDate: 2005-05-26
Reviewid: 122736Chapter: 1
Awesome!!

Reviewer: RachelDate: 2005-05-23
Reviewid: 122633Chapter: 1
Wow, I had to write a review on this story. I was having a very terrible, mellow-dramatic day! Not feeling the greatest about anything. But then I read this story. Leave it to the relations of these four Hogwarts students to leave me with a grin on my face for the rest of the day! Thanks, your writting skilld are quite splendid. "Elephant!" that was a great line ;)

Reviewer: srutiDate: 2005-05-23
Reviewid: 122631Chapter: 1
loved it--superb

Reviewer: louisaDate: 2005-05-22
Reviewid: 122592Chapter: 1
Ohhhh, *girly squeals*, lovely. I love Ron blurting out 'elephant', thank goodness our Hermione's too smart to take offense (It always annoys me when fic authors make her super-sensitive). More of your lovely romantic stuff please.

Reviewer: KatjaDate: 2005-05-22
Reviewid: 122574Chapter: 1
Ooh, that was great. So many interwoven threads, and (almost) all tied up cleverly! (I hope Harry's won't be in too much trouble...)

Reviewer: SonicDate: 2005-05-21
Reviewid: 122560Chapter: 1
Wow. Normally, I don't read unadulterated fluff, but...

your fluff is fluffier than the fluffiest fluff. And I mean that in a good way. :)

Reviewer: GillianDate: 2005-05-21
Reviewid: 122557Chapter: 1
Excellent job!! Too funny!

Reviewer: TheFasterYouUpdateTheBetterDate: 2005-05-20
Reviewid: 122517Chapter: 1
Hee hee... nice ending

Reviewer: LilacDate: 2005-05-20
Reviewid: 122475Chapter: 1
SO CUTE! Even better the second time reading this. So glad you submitted it!

Reviewer: GenesseDate: 2005-05-20
Reviewid: 122474Chapter: 1
Oh, that was really cute and funny! Well done!

Reviewer: Angelina WeasleyDate: 2005-05-18
Reviewid: 122393Chapter: 1
"An elephant!"
Ron...ronronron...
Don't you just want to pick him up and SQUEEZE him?
Though.. that would be kinda hard...
I love this story. Really, I do.

Reviewer: emma moonDate: 2005-05-18
Reviewid: 122372Chapter: 1
What a wonderful story. I loved it!

Reviewer: JaclynDate: 2005-05-18
Reviewid: 122353Chapter: 1
Aww! That was so cute. The ending was great to! "Can I borrow a sickle?". I really like how you seemed in tuned to all of the charactors attitudes. I also really liked the elephant idea, no girl would want to turn into an elephant, bcause they weigh a ton, but thats like the first thing ron thinks of, for the most innocent of reasons too :). Great job.

Reviewer: Muggle MollyDate: 2005-05-18
Reviewid: 122273Chapter: 1
Loved it! The last line was perfect.

Reviewer: nightcrawler1089Date: 2005-05-17
Reviewid: 122250Chapter: 1
Ba-dum-dum-Chh! Classy ending and a nice story--it was a pleasure reading it. Thanks :-)

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