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| Reviewer: Reader 2 | Date: 2006-04-03 |
| Reviewid: 141588 | Chapter: 1 |
A truly superb piece. The main story is easy to buy. Kingsley is a bit harder to swallow. Quite Excellent. Thanks |
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| Reviewer: Lorie | Date: 2005-06-05 |
| Reviewid: 123360 | Chapter: 2 |
| So far it is very nice, and the tension is building really well. I especially wanted to comment on the beginning, I liked how your Barty walked along and thought out his relationship with his dad. Great job! |
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| Reviewer: Morag Camshron | Date: 2005-06-02 |
| Reviewid: 123219 | Chapter: 2 |
Wow, Rincewind, this is positively chilling. Especially when you know what happens in the end to poor Frank and Alice… not to mention Neville… and Barty Crouch. You’ve shown a bright boy’s longing for his father’s approval very well. Keep writing!
- Morag Camshron |
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