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Review(s): 5
| Reviewer: blake | Date: 2005-06-21 |
| Reviewid: 124782 | Chapter: 2 |
the beginning to this story i definitely intriguing... i cant wait to see where you go with this (I escpecially want to see what your take on the attitides/perspectives of the Blacks)! i also like the style in which you're writing this fic...
I have a quick question though: I wouldn't have thought that Andromeda would be so friendly to her mother... or does this story take place before she was going out with Ted Tonks?
hoping for an update soon,
blake |
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| Reviewer: merry101 | Date: 2005-06-19 |
| Reviewid: 124480 | Chapter: 1 |
someone ALWAYS has to outdo me. DUH! this is and AWESOME start, and you're making me feel like a right dolt. i bust my butt to try and write a decent story about the young marauders, focusing on the blacks, and you just go ahead and score 10 points higher. you rock, dude!
~merry |
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| Reviewer: jem | Date: 2005-06-15 |
| Reviewid: 124029 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is an intriguing beginning -- I am very interested to know how Sirius is going to fit into the scenario with Andromeda and Bellatrix. Your style of writing is smooth and flowing and quickly captures the attention of the reader. You have put in enough tantalizing hints to make me want to read more. I would have liked a longer chapter! |
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