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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Heros
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2005-12-15
Reviewid: 137228Chapter: 1
Out .. standing.

Reviewer: GryfnyDate: 2005-06-24
Reviewid: 125028Chapter: 1
You have an excellent characterasation of Peter. I found it very funny that Peter was gambling at Hogwarts.

I like the idea that it's based on what was going on in the Wizarding world at that time.

"It's not my fault Vader's fascinating."
Hmm, Interesting.

I really like the way you have a knack for writing Peter's inner character, what's going through his mind, spot on. His feelings about the Voldemort war, and the diffrences between Star Wars, and the present war. And of course his feelings in fighting Voldemort. The healer not the auror.

Great Job on this story.

Reviewer: snufflesDate: 2005-06-18
Reviewid: 124421Chapter: 1
how cool, you should do one where al the marauders watch "Revenge of the Sith"

Reviewer: Miss E BennettDate: 2005-06-11
Reviewid: 123767Chapter: 1
You like being really, really brilliant, don't you? Of course you do. It's got to be amazing, being able to write like this. Possibly the best Peterfic I have ever seen, and I'm not utilizing my hyperbole here. Just one thing--I thought that they never really showed that Leia was being tortured until some point in the EU. Right? Wasn't there a discussion about this on fanficrants or something? (If you could, drop me a line on LJ--I'm principessa05. 'Cos I'm just a bit confused.)

Reviewer: LoriDate: 2005-06-11
Reviewid: 123699Chapter: 1
Oh, it hurts to think that the hopeful, idealistic Peter in this story will be completely twisted into something else in less than four years. Very good job!

Reviewer: J ForiasDate: 2005-06-10
Reviewid: 123684Chapter: 1
You capture Peter brilliantly well here, his inadequacies (brought on a lot by his mother), and his little-boy dreams. It is all very sad really. The way you worked the film into Peter's thoughts was very clever and I really liked his corrections of Han. I could almost hear his bitter, sulky sounding voice!

And this line completely cracked me up.

---"Mos Eisley Spaceport. You will never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy."

"You've never been to Birmingham, have you?" Peter murmured.---

Although, I think Birmingham has a bad rep. The city centre is actually rather nice.

Anyway, all in all, a very good idea and rather well executed. Good job!

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