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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: MagicDust | Date: 2005-12-08 |
| Reviewid: 136917 | Chapter: 1 |
I read this a while back but now I re-read it again and all I can say is... YAYS!As usual,your writing is senstaiontal!Perfect!*hands out butterbeers*
Cheers!-
MagicDust |
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| Reviewer: Louise | Date: 2005-07-09 |
| Reviewid: 126668 | Chapter: 1 |
| Brilliant! But I would like to know who Hermonie was going to marry and why she left...she said it was because of her love for Ron but is there more behind that? |
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| Reviewer: mamma | Date: 2005-07-08 |
| Reviewid: 126546 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow, Miss Gypsy! Another beautiful story...you are such a romantic! It reminded me of my younger days with 'you-know-who.' ;) |
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| Reviewer: Erica Vermette | Date: 2005-07-03 |
| Reviewid: 125950 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh! That was so cute. I love the way you wrote the part with him and Hermione by the lake at the gala, it's such a vivid scene. |
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| Reviewer: edcoolio | Date: 2005-06-29 |
| Reviewid: 125613 | Chapter: 1 |
"Ron threw a pebble into the lake. It splashed and then sank. Just like the pair of them." ...I love that line!
Great story - I was surprised by the ending. I think it would be an even better read if it could be a bit longer. The transition from extreme heartache to bliss is kind of abrupt, but pleasing nonetheless.
Your talent is amazing and growing stronger with time. |
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| Reviewer: Alayne Cira | Date: 2005-06-29 |
| Reviewid: 125570 | Chapter: 1 |
| I really enjoyed reading your story; it reminded me of a strange series of daydreams I had in summer school. I liked how you used flashbacks in such a way that they fit in with the story and didn't disturb the flow of dialouge and description. Great Job!! |
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| Reviewer: vivily | Date: 2005-06-28 |
| Reviewid: 125485 | Chapter: 1 |
cute. i was all set up for it to be a sad ending.... but come to think of it, that is exactly what hermione would do.
well done. |
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