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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: Poppy P | Date: 2007-08-23 |
| Reviewid: 148992 | Chapter: 1 |
I was poking around some old review threads and found a recommendation for this fic, so I came on over. Boy was I glad! I can't believe I never read this little gem before. Absolutely beautiful. The bit w/ the second couple was so (dare I say it?) sweet! I liked your author's note which indicated that this was Charlie and a girl. It's nice to see him having a love life too.
The person who recommended this fic insisted that the reader would be craving chocolate by the end of it; I should've believed them! Darn, the only chocolate in the house is my son's last fudge pop! Hmmm...he is asleep already.... |
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| Reviewer: Genne-vera | Date: 2006-08-27 |
| Reviewid: 145042 | Chapter: 1 |
| aww gawsh! that was one the absolute cutest! but yes, chocolate=DAAARRK magic! everything seemed so... picturesque, in such a wonderful way.---now i'm craving chocolate. way to go. |
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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2006-01-18 |
| Reviewid: 138692 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww, this is lovely! Very intense somehow- I think that might be having all the characters unnamed- and it was interesting seeing which sweets the characters all chose. I knew the second guy was Charlie, although I had no idea who the girl was. And the girl who changed her mind about the sugared almonds was Ginny, right? My favourite one was the R/Hr part at the end. It was so in character for them . I loved how Ron finally plucked up the courage to distract Hermione with a choccie- and for all her eye rolling she obviously enjoyed it! I often think what interesting stories objects might have to tell- I like how you told this objects story. I just found myself wishing there were more..... |
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| Reviewer: Camry | Date: 2006-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 138644 | Chapter: 1 |
This was very fun to read, so sweet (pun intended ;) ). Seriously, I think it takes real skill to fit characterization and action into little vignettes. Very well done. Also- I agree with the reviewer who said:
"With a demure smile, she carefully inspected the choices, then lifted out a square of dark chocolate. She held it tantalisingly in her long fingers for a moment, then lifted it to his mouth."
seemed like a very Fleur way to deal with chocolate. |
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| Reviewer: Thessaly | Date: 2005-11-20 |
| Reviewid: 136054 | Chapter: 1 |
| Mmm...Weasleys and chocolate. You can't get any sweeter than that. I loved the Ginny (at least I think it was Ginny, anyway). And I should think the second couple *is* Bill and Fleur - "With a demure smile, she carefully inspected the choices, then lifted out a square of dark chocolate. She held it tantalisingly in her long fingers for a moment, then lifted it to his mouth." It's such a Fleur was to deal with chocolate! |
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| Reviewer: Ylime | Date: 2005-11-15 |
| Reviewid: 135903 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was ... amazing. Really gorgeous, and a mixture of rich deepness and soft fluff. Fascinating and beautiful. Thank you! |
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| Reviewer: HPFreak | Date: 2005-10-30 |
| Reviewid: 135486 | Chapter: 1 |
| Beautifully and masterfully written, not a tad overdone, especially the character descriptions. I loved it and could even taste the chocolate in my mouth. Now I need some dark chocolate. |
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| Reviewer: Glowing Toadstool | Date: 2005-09-22 |
| Reviewid: 133058 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww, I love it! That was a wonderful read. :) Your writing was fantastic in this piece! Nice work, so keep at it! |
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| Reviewer: Ginny | Date: 2005-07-29 |
| Reviewid: 128163 | Chapter: 1 |
OMG OMG OMG I LUV IT!! :P
Okay, sorry, I know that was frightening, but seriously, it's a fantastic piece of literature. It's short, yet it shows so many emotions and gets so many points across...it's just beautiful. Oh, and I knew who the second couple was. Well, I knew it was Charlie and SOMEBODY anyway. Who "Somebody" is, I dunno, but I knew it was Charlie. Anyways, keep up the phenomenal (sp?) work!! |
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| Reviewer: Berte | Date: 2005-07-28 |
| Reviewid: 128067 | Chapter: 1 |
Cool! And sweet.. chocolate is indeed black magic. Dark magic of the most tantalizing, seducing kind. I hardly know anyone who's able to resist. Neither are the Weasleys - or their loved ones, I see.
Nice piece! |
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| Reviewer: Eudora Hawkins | Date: 2005-07-10 |
| Reviewid: 126697 | Chapter: 1 |
Chocolate and love! How can you go wrong? Loved it! Perhaps it's more a reflection on my own stage of life, but Arthur was my favorite.
Sweeter than chocolate. And that's saying a lot!
BTW, Charlie and his girl were smuff-worthy. Licking the carmel off her finger? *fans self* |
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