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Review(s): 4
| Reviewer: Byrd | Date: 2005-09-07 |
| Reviewid: 131917 | Chapter: 1 |
| I loved this series. I'm curious, though – who did you have in mind as the defense teacher? Or was it just something you threw out there as a loose end designed to tantalize us? |
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| Reviewer: Astrid | Date: 2005-07-13 |
| Reviewid: 127023 | Chapter: 1 |
Yea, I've enjoyed this seried. Another good one.
Concrit- I'd consider using more contractions in the dialogue since most people use them in speeche. |
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