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Review(s): 13
| Reviewer: GinOvia | Date: 2005-12-05 |
| Reviewid: 136769 | Chapter: 1 |
This was so wonderful. Shor and sweet and to the point.
"“I locked away my dolls,” she’d whispered, “but I never locked away my heart.”" Bittersweet and oh-so touching.
~asekae19 (LJ) |
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| Reviewer: Erica Vee | Date: 2005-08-15 |
| Reviewid: 130054 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is beautifully lyrical. I love the imagery, and the way the whole thing sort of drifts by, just the way someone would be thinking that late at night. |
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| Reviewer: Adele | Date: 2005-08-14 |
| Reviewid: 129927 | Chapter: 1 |
| You have a beautiful poetic language well weaved into Harry and Ginny's relationship. 'Remember me at midnight' is especially touching. Well-written, albeit short; thanks for sharing this. |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2005-08-14 |
| Reviewid: 129914 | Chapter: 1 |
| You've captured Harry's isolation beautifully. My heart goes out to him wherever he is. I'm glad the Ginny made him buy the watch even though it has become a two-edged sword for him. I hope he can finish his quest and get back to his source of happiness soon. |
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| Reviewer: mallary | Date: 2005-08-14 |
| Reviewid: 129908 | Chapter: 1 |
| that was pretty. I know that's not very constructive, but that's the first word that came to mind for me. That was very pretty. |
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| Reviewer: Starsea | Date: 2005-08-13 |
| Reviewid: 129866 | Chapter: 1 |
Poetic and intense, I love the way you use language. I'm sure this will haunt me for a while. The way you describe her as the one constant in his life is perfect.
xxx~Starsea~xxx |
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| Reviewer: Lu | Date: 2005-08-13 |
| Reviewid: 129859 | Chapter: 1 |
This is lovely, and so fitting. I love your evolution of Ginny:
"With his eyes shut, he could picture her clearly: a little child chasing a train; a school girl running towards him; a woman left behind – waiting – as dawn bled, pink and terrifying, across the dark summer sky." That is such beautiful imagery.
And I love how strong your message of hope is, that's a nice way to allievate how down people are from HBP....so, all around nice job!! |
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