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Reviews for: A Time to Laugh
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: PythonBlossomDate: 2005-09-24
Reviewid: 133135Chapter: 1
"It hurt too much to cry."

That was brilliant.

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2005-08-29
Reviewid: 131160Chapter: 1
Nice

Reviewer: MiriamDate: 2005-08-25
Reviewid: 130849Chapter: 1
Interesting. I like your take on what went on in Sirius Black's mind during this event. I particularly like the imagery of Sirius as a human with the instincts of a dog. That was clever.

It is interesting that you have Sirius believing that while Peter did it, he did not do it alone. He had to have been threatened by Bellatrix, and Remus had to lead Bellatrix to Peter. I like the insane anger Sirius had when he realized that Peter did it all by himself.

I love reading your stories, and I cannot wait until you bring more of your plot bunnies to the light.

Sincerely,
Miriam

Reviewer: StarseaDate: 2005-08-23
Reviewid: 130756Chapter: 1
Very interesting view of Sirius's final moments as a free man, and a twist on the normal assumption that he automatically knew the truth. It makes Peter's betrayal even worse in a way. The emotion and confusion are very realistic.

xxx~Starsea~xxx

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