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Review(s): 9
| Reviewer: Brooke | Date: 2005-09-15 |
| Reviewid: 132562 | Chapter: 1 |
Love the RLNT! I enjoyed your use of the "peg" metaphor, especially the description of how Remus lives his life.
More please! (especially with RLNT) =] |
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| Reviewer: birdsong | Date: 2005-09-12 |
| Reviewid: 132376 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very good! Amazing how you used the "peg" theme in the story, the way you used it when describing them, even in the end "peg their future". Again, very good! |
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| Reviewer: Miss Gypsy | Date: 2005-09-11 |
| Reviewid: 132333 | Chapter: 1 |
I loved the comparison at the very beginning - the analogy of their relationship's likeness to an elephant in the parlour. That's an excellent way to describe those unmentioned relationships that we all seem to stumble into.
Good story, I enjoyed it. |
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| Reviewer: Katinka | Date: 2005-09-11 |
| Reviewid: 132315 | Chapter: 1 |
>>In the next two hours the elephant in the parlour had to find a new zoo, the ache of loneliness dissipated, and two seemingly opposite people found that there was common ground on which to peg their future.<<
*happy sigh*
That was a lovely, well-paced moment between the two of them. :) |
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| Reviewer: Sam | Date: 2005-09-11 |
| Reviewid: 132312 | Chapter: 1 |
| I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. Esp the last line. It's FANTASTIC. Keep up the AMAZINGLY good work. |
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| Reviewer: Lu | Date: 2005-09-11 |
| Reviewid: 132287 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow, that was excellent! So insightful on both of their parts. It really makes me feel as though you've "pegged" them spot on. Loved both your characterizations....can't wait to read more!! |
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