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| Reviewer: birdsong | Date: 2005-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 135738 | Chapter: 1 |
| Great story! Good job of presenting what may have led up to the shredding of the Fat Lady's picture. You did a great job of mixing past and present; best I've read! Keep up the good work! |
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| Reviewer: Potioncat | Date: 2005-10-11 |
| Reviewid: 134324 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very nicely written! The shifting sense of time, the tightness in Sirius's emotions, the brief snatches of familiar things, all combined to make this a very suspenseful story. Sirius's character was captured in a most interesting way. |
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| Reviewer: Mirlda | Date: 2005-10-10 |
| Reviewid: 134124 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow. Very powerful. I think we'd all like to think that Sirius was perfectly sane, but I'm sure he wasn't. I think this captures what he would have been thinking to act like how he did that night. Great job. |
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