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Review(s): 10
| Reviewer: Emmy-loo | Date: 2007-12-08 |
| Reviewid: 150103 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, wow, I'm amazed how close you are to canon here - it could almost be written after the seventh book! |
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| Reviewer: vasilisa | Date: 2006-01-19 |
| Reviewid: 138721 | Chapter: 1 |
| this is a realy interesting perspective. you should write more, the story doesn't seem to be over, and it is really really good. |
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| Reviewer: Sagacious C | Date: 2005-11-18 |
| Reviewid: 135982 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ooooh, very good! You set the tone well and got the characters beautifully. I like your take on Snape's loyalties and motivations. |
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| Reviewer: LadyCrow | Date: 2005-11-15 |
| Reviewid: 135913 | Chapter: 1 |
How fortunate that I found an amazing story w/my favorite character. Looking forward to more, Firebird.
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Pax,
LC |
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| Reviewer: feylin | Date: 2005-11-15 |
| Reviewid: 135909 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like that all of the characters are as evil and angsty as they should be - without being over done. So many authors go overboard with Voldemort's evilness or Snape's torturedness(is that a word?). You've shown us just the right amount. I hope you keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: fitzette | Date: 2005-11-15 |
| Reviewid: 135889 | Chapter: 1 |
This sent a chill right up my spine.
You're writing is great; descriptive withouth being tedious. Subtle while remaining clear. Lovely.
This is a great sentance:
He seldom glanced left or right, but he occasionally pulled back his left sleeve to peer at a spot on his arm, rubbing it fretfully, as though it pained him.
I'm looking forward to much more from you! |
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| Reviewer: Rachael DuBois | Date: 2005-11-15 |
| Reviewid: 135882 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, this was very well written! Wonderfull characterization. I enjoyed this. |
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