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Review(s): 8
| Reviewer: mixedcolors767 | Date: 2009-01-05 |
| Reviewid: 151316 | Chapter: 3 |
| This is a great story! the series is agreat idea and very accurate! please update soon! |
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| Reviewer: Nimbus 2000 | Date: 2007-06-25 |
| Reviewid: 148366 | Chapter: 3 |
| I LOVE IT this story make me laugh so much you have a real gift write more please! |
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| Reviewer: Genesse | Date: 2006-01-07 |
| Reviewid: 138118 | Chapter: 2 |
I'm so glad that you updated!
I liked this chapter a lot - the scene in the Pettigrew's kitchen is priceless and >>>“You underestimate him, Alexander.”<<< this is my *favorite* line. I think you handled Remus' innermonologue very well. His good-bye to his grandfather was so sad - I hope he hangs on for a while. |
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| Reviewer: jynx67 | Date: 2006-01-06 |
| Reviewid: 138091 | Chapter: 3 |
| Oh dear, this was incredibly funny. I loved every bit of this chapter. James' babbling was great! Very witty! Nice job. I can't wait to see the next chapter! |
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| Reviewer: jynx67 | Date: 2006-01-06 |
| Reviewid: 138088 | Chapter: 2 |
| Oh! That is the most original way for the boys to get the Marauder's map I've ever seen. Quite a bit of dialogue in this chapter, but I really like the character interactions. And I adore Mrs. Potter and her assessment of Sirius. Nice! |
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| Reviewer: Genesse | Date: 2005-11-20 |
| Reviewid: 136072 | Chapter: 1 |
Yay! There *is* going to be a Year Three!
I'm glad that you explained by Sirius is scared of cows. I loved that James and Sirius were excited about the street lights. I had forgotten that Peter was Muggleborn.
I hope that you get another chapter up soon! I love your Marauder stories! |
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| Reviewer: Rainbow | Date: 2005-11-16 |
| Reviewid: 135927 | Chapter: 1 |
Bloody brilliant! I was so excited to finally see this up on the Quill. Does this mean you're going to get up new chapters?
I do wish you hadn't taken out the line about the mailman and the pineapples. And Sirius's new answer to the Veritaserum question seemed a little forced.
Favorite line: "We get detentions for fun." Priceless!
All in all, this is evey bit as good as Years One and Two. Keep it up, please! |
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