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Review(s): 22
| Reviewer: Astrid | Date: 2008-09-28 |
| Reviewid: 151128 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is lovely! Cedric is such a gentleman. It makes me sad again that he died in GoF. |
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| Reviewer: Sara | Date: 2007-01-05 |
| Reviewid: 146748 | Chapter: 1 |
| Somehow I've never managed to read one of your stories , I think, but you were so heartily praised now at the OMG-thread that I just had to try out - and they were right! These were wonderfully caught moments with just the right words, I'm much in awe. So I'll just go further to read the rest ;-), Sara |
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| Reviewer: Hpgirl42095 | Date: 2006-07-20 |
| Reviewid: 144295 | Chapter: 1 |
| OMG... I don't think that's possible, but I think u just made me luv Cedric a wee bit more than Harry. :D |
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| Reviewer: persephone33 | Date: 2006-06-06 |
| Reviewid: 143255 | Chapter: 1 |
That just makes me miss Cedic even more! Lovely story... and so well written!
persephone |
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| Reviewer: Pink Sunflower | Date: 2006-04-25 |
| Reviewid: 142238 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is a really lovely story, it's depicted Cedric really well and puts Cho in a different light to how a lot of other fics portray her. I really enjoyed this series of 'missing moments' and think they really fill in a lot from JK's books, especially Ginny, who often seemed to 'fall through the cracks' as it were to begin with. This really captures her well. |
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| Reviewer: dumblydorr729 | Date: 2006-04-04 |
| Reviewid: 141637 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was SO lovely - I really like seeing Ginny through the eyes of other characters, since Harry was too busy to notice her through the first 5 books. Your Cedric is lovely, its easy to see why he was so well liked. And I loved your characterization of Ron too. Ginny's innocence is heartwarming. Please keep writing, you are brilliant! |
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| Reviewer: SillyGillie | Date: 2006-02-12 |
| Reviewid: 139723 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww! That's so cute. Poor Cedric. He was such an awesome guy. I can't believe Peter killed him. *sob* Brilliant story! |
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| Reviewer: bennedetto | Date: 2006-02-05 |
| Reviewid: 139368 | Chapter: 1 |
I really loved it! I love your work, and I especially loved this 'un. My only criticism being that Ginny "accepted gratefully" a butterbeer and the larger half of Cedric's chocolate bar. Using a few synonyms probably wouldn't hurt. :D
All the same, it was just awesome. I love the way you portrayed Ron; the way he instantly started accusing Cedric of making Ginny cry.
The whole thing was just lovely.
Peace forever
bennedetto |
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| Reviewer: Norwegian Blue | Date: 2005-12-09 |
| Reviewid: 136952 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a sweet fic. Both of them are pretty in character, and even though I can't think of any canon evidence to support these missing moments, there isn't any to contradict it either, though I suppose you already knew that. In any case, set up this way, I prefer to think that it happened. Again, wonderful fic. |
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| Reviewer: revolvingstaircase | Date: 2005-12-08 |
| Reviewid: 136933 | Chapter: 1 |
| You made Cedric so real! I saw the movie and now I can see this story and its twice as sad! I'm actually sitting here kind of sniffing and the guy at the next computer is looking at me funny. This is a nice story. I hope you do more of it. |
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| Reviewer: Milaya | Date: 2005-12-04 |
| Reviewid: 136754 | Chapter: 1 |
| Adorable! There's so little Cedric-fic out there that it's always lovely to come across a gem like this. Cedric feels completely in character; you do a great job of exploring his canon personality as the perfect "nice guy," and his perspective on the Harry/Ginny interaction is just wonderful. Ginny is cute as well, and it's interesting to see how she's more defiant when Ron's around. All in all, what a great one-shot! |
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| Reviewer: Angelina Weasley | Date: 2005-12-04 |
| Reviewid: 136752 | Chapter: 1 |
Great story!
I loved how you had Ced ru into Ginny all over the school,at the Yule Ball,etc.
Write more,I really like your style.
-Angelina Weasley |
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| Reviewer: mary ellis | Date: 2005-12-04 |
| Reviewid: 136746 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cedric taking Ginny under his wing. Very nice. And Ginny uttering the word "Tom" as if he was a friend and Cedric thinking she was talking about just another student--perhaps a jealous boyfriend--chilling! |
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| Reviewer: Astrid | Date: 2005-12-04 |
| Reviewid: 136736 | Chapter: 1 |
| Considering I'm currently half in love with Cedric right now thanks to the lovely new film, this was even more delightful to read. I love your characterization of him- I know we don't see much of him, but you've taken the canon and come up with a good portrayal. His and Ginny's interaction is so sweet, so caring. Good work. |
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| Reviewer: Poppy P | Date: 2005-12-04 |
| Reviewid: 136733 | Chapter: 1 |
| You painted a wonderful picture of Cedric. I know he's supposed to be so gallant in book 4 and the tragic hero, but I never really felt it until now. The ending was especially sweet. Now I feel really sad about Cedric, thanks! ;) |
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| Reviewer: Arimalka | Date: 2005-12-04 |
| Reviewid: 136725 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was so nice...at the end, this terrible lump came up my throat when I thought about what happens to Cedric. He was so nice...*sigh*. His characterization in this was really spot on. |
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