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Review(s): 8
| Reviewer: PigWithHair | Date: 2006-11-12 |
| Reviewid: 146150 | Chapter: 1 |
| I can't recall if I've reviewed this before so pardon me if I have but that is so very sweet. They are so good at miscommunication and cross purposes. Very them. |
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| Reviewer: magicaljules | Date: 2005-12-21 |
| Reviewid: 137515 | Chapter: 1 |
This was lovely. :) The last bit was my favorite, Ron kissing Hermione on the forehead and cheek. That's so tender and loving. *sigh*
And I love how he jumped to Ginny's defense, even though he was doing almost the same thing as Harry had.
Thanks for writing this. :)
Jules |
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| Reviewer: Madaline Fabray | Date: 2005-12-18 |
| Reviewid: 137339 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was so sweet! You do the "unwritten dialogue" -- the tension, trying to find comfort in the mundane while ignoring the little white elephant -- so well. Ron's sincerity, nobleness and *sigh* cluelessness are spot on. |
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| Reviewer: Genesse | Date: 2005-12-17 |
| Reviewid: 137301 | Chapter: 1 |
I was very excited to see your name on the update list!
This is excellent! Ron is perfect - the way he gears himself up to the kiss, his defense of Ginny, looking at Hermione like she's a piece of gold his Niffler found. I love, love, love that Hermione had to tell him that it was his cue to kiss her again. And bless her for not wanting to wait.
Well done! I look forward to more from you! |
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| Reviewer: Aeterna | Date: 2005-12-16 |
| Reviewid: 137249 | Chapter: 1 |
I'm currently reeling with excitement over seeing my own story published on the "Latest Fanfiction", and anxiously awaiting reviews, so I thought I'd read and review some other "Latest Fanfiction" in the process.
This was really beautiful. I mean, really. You just nailed both of them, and Harry as well, and the situation, and their history, and just ...
I'm getting a little incoherent, I know, but this is really a quality piece of fiction. Beautiful.
Much love,
'Terna |
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