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Reviews for: Cry for Love
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: Ginny LoverDate: 2006-09-14
Reviewid: 145331Chapter: 1
Love your writing.... All of your stories move and captivate me. This one maybe the most.... Awesome work, keep the unbelievable writing.

Reviewer: WeaselsuDate: 2006-02-11
Reviewid: 139648Chapter: 1
This is great! I don't think Ron is out of character. Everyone had been hoping Harry and Giny would get together for a while so he's had time to think it through and when they finally do he's just relieved and happy! Good job! XXXOOO

Reviewer: AdeleDate: 2005-12-22
Reviewid: 137537Chapter: 1
I agree with the first reviewer that it was a little dramatic, and that Ron's comments toward the end were rather out of character. But otherwise, it was a good first piece. You did a nice job capturing both Harry's and Ginny's view of one another. I hope you continue your hobby and build your skills - you're on your way, I can see!

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2005-12-20
Reviewid: 137463Chapter: 1
Nice.

Reviewer: PrettyPixieDate: 2005-12-18
Reviewid: 137340Chapter: 1
Hmmmmmmm, nice for a first try. i love the description if everything. I think you captured both Ginny's and Harry's feelings perfectly. But from your writing style I can tell that you should keep on writing short storys. I dont think you'd be very good at long ones.

Reviewer: MagicdustDate: 2005-12-17
Reviewid: 137302Chapter: 1
I LOVED IT!DO YOU HEAR ME!That was aweomse.....SEQUEL!Please.....!
Cheers
Magicdust

Reviewer: Mansoor HaqueDate: 2005-12-17
Reviewid: 137292Chapter: 1
Well, it's good, but slightly on the melodramatic side. The "healing" magic thing is a good idea.

Your writing, especially the inner dialogue and description, is superb. Just improve the spoken dialouge (like Ron's comments near the end - I don't think he'd talk like that) to make it more believeable and you'll have an excellent story on your hands

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