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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: fitzette | Date: 2006-01-04 |
| Reviewid: 138012 | Chapter: 1 |
This? is too cute. You've made Fleur completely endearing, letting me see her how Bill sees her. Yeah, she's haughty and dramatic and truly too beautiful for her own good, but she's also kind and loving and makes Bill happy. Very nicely done.
my favorite bits are
"Okay." Fleur sniffed hard, sounding like most of the nose drainage shot straight up to her brain.
"Gross, Fleur."
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Bill grinned at her and pulled her back into his arms. "Your English is much improved."
"Yes, I know."
"So is your humility."
I'm off to read the rest of your goodies! |
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| Reviewer: Starsea | Date: 2006-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 137916 | Chapter: 1 |
Beautiful. I love how Fleur's accent disappears as she becomes more reasonable. Fleur's accent is something that tends to irritate me in the books, and I often wonder if she exaggerates it slightly. I also like the affection between her and Bill. Sweet but not sickening.
xxx~Starsea~xxx |
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| Reviewer: Zsenya | Date: 2006-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 137905 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was really a sweet interlude! I liked getting to see a hidden moment with Bill and Fleur, as I have often wondered what they would talk about when alone. |
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| Reviewer: Sappho | Date: 2005-12-31 |
| Reviewid: 137843 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was great, very sweet. I loved how you portrayed Bill and Fleur's relationship: it was clear that Bill loved Fleur as a person and wasn't just infatuated with her looks. |
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