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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Together, Alone
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: Gred And FeorgeDate: 2007-11-21
Reviewid: 149969Chapter: 1
I know that this is an old story but I wanted to congragulat (can't spell) you on getting it right. Fred did die. He was killed just before Voldemort was. The funaral was quite good and very bittersweet.
There was one thing that didn't feel right though: George wouldn't just become a slobbering drunk and give up everything he worked so hard for. He wouldn't let Fred die in vane, He'd keep fighting. In the book he fought untill the very end-maby because thats what Fred would have wanted. Fred would have seen the battle through.
I also want you toj know that I love Fred and that your storie made all Fred and George lovers remember that they are men-they stood for what they belived in and thats what its all about...*sniffle,sniffle...sob!*

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-01-12
Reviewid: 138368Chapter: 1
Quite Nice. But, Countdown was markedly better

Reviewer: AstridDate: 2006-01-08
Reviewid: 138217Chapter: 1
Geez, make me cry, why don't you?

Good, but horribly bittersweet, more tragic than anything.

Reviewer: AryaDate: 2006-01-08
Reviewid: 138214Chapter: 1
Oh, this makes me want to cry! It's a lovely fic, written very well. I'd like to see more of George alone, how he really acts after some time of being alone. It's always interesting reading fics like this, but they seem to be rare! Good job, I liked it!

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