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Review(s): 7
| Reviewer: Reesie | Date: 2006-04-04 |
| Reviewid: 141614 | Chapter: 1 |
Wonderful, heart-wrenching story. I am a huge Neville fan - you do a great job characterizing him here. I loved this: "She held out a closed hand towards him. Opening it, she revealed several gum wrappers all folded into shapes of different animals.
Neville smiled, "Oh Mum! So that's what you've been trying to do." He felt so warm inside at finally being able to understand his mother.
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| Reviewer: EricaVee | Date: 2006-01-16 |
| Reviewid: 138616 | Chapter: 1 |
| *sniff* I loved it! I don't really have anything to say about it; I have no criticism and it really just speaks for itself. Suffice it to say that this is wonderful! |
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| Reviewer: Ara Kane | Date: 2006-01-16 |
| Reviewid: 138598 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was so sweet (and not just because of the gum wrappers!) :) I have no doubt that what Neville would like most in life is to have his parents whole and healthy and happy. Thank you for depicting it and fleshing it out so beautifully. |
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| Reviewer: mary ellis | Date: 2006-01-14 |
| Reviewid: 138513 | Chapter: 1 |
| You have made my day! This is a most touching and well-thought-out sketch. I've always rooted for Neville and you've given me more reasons to believe he will turn out all right. You make the simplicity of origami figures and a favorite chair into symbols of hope and abiding love. Thanks so much. |
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