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Review(s): 11
| Reviewer: kendra004 | Date: 2007-09-09 |
| Reviewid: 149199 | Chapter: 1 |
| lifehouse is my favourite band so reading this was just amazing. combining a love story that touches me so much with one of my favourite songs was incredible. you are a great writer and want to thank you for this, it really touched my heart! :) |
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| Reviewer: Geena Waters | Date: 2006-05-11 |
| Reviewid: 142729 | Chapter: 1 |
I know I've already read and reviewed this story, but I had to read it again, because I love it so much. You can almost feel the awkwardness of it all just by reading it. And that's a wonderful thing to be able to accomplish as a writer. *sigh*
~GW |
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| Reviewer: Geena Waters | Date: 2006-02-17 |
| Reviewid: 139969 | Chapter: 1 |
That was so beautiful. I'm serious. I have cloudy eyes...tears threatening to fall....only wish that could happen to me (don't we all?). Wow. Amazing. Can't. Express. In. Words. Wow. Speechless. Love it.
~GW |
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| Reviewer: Songbird | Date: 2006-01-25 |
| Reviewid: 138879 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is so wonderful. You've nailed their relationship the beauty as well as the difficulties. *sniffle* Wonderful. |
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| Reviewer: LadyCrow | Date: 2006-01-18 |
| Reviewid: 138695 | Chapter: 1 |
Thank you for fixing the odd formatting errors! Your story was very sweet, & well worth waiting for the corrections. ;)
Pax,
LC |
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| Reviewer: Angelina Weasley | Date: 2006-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 138661 | Chapter: 1 |
AWW!! This was such the cute story.
Hermione was being rather forward, though..
Actually, I really like how you kept switching back and forth beween perspecties, it's a very cool style.
Keep it up!
Angelina Weasley |
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| Reviewer: Ylime | Date: 2006-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 138649 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh, that was wonderful!! I so much enjoyed it ~ so romantic, sweet and so beautiful. I normally don't read things with song lyrics in it, but they really worked here - so good! I adored how you jumped between His and Her thoughts - it worked so well and it was great to see the two sides. And that lovely smattering of humour with the falling in love with Harry thing. *laughs* So perfectly in-key with the mood, and yet it didn't detract from the R/H loveliness.
Fantastic piece, well done. :) |
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| Reviewer: ceilidh | Date: 2006-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 138646 | Chapter: 1 |
| I stopped reading halfway through because of all the distracting, weird characters stuck throughout the story. It's too bad... your story seemed to be really good and original, and I would read it if it weren't so hard to understand it. Please fix this problem! |
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| Reviewer: OSUSprinks | Date: 2006-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 138645 | Chapter: 1 |
| It was a little difficult to get through with all the strange symbols showing up in the text, but it is beautiful none the less. I hope you cna get it cleaned up so it's easier to read! |
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| Reviewer: FordPrefect | Date: 2006-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 138643 | Chapter: 1 |
| This fic is all but unreadable due to the strange characters appearing in the body of the text (ie …). Can't someone clean it up before posting (or after posting?) |
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