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Review(s): 10
| Reviewer: raindropshp | Date: 2006-05-14 |
| Reviewid: 142802 | Chapter: 1 |
| I still love it though so don`t take my last comment the wrong way. It really was absolutely marvolous. |
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| Reviewer: raindropshp | Date: 2006-05-14 |
| Reviewid: 142801 | Chapter: 1 |
| I was literally on the verge of crying and [I don`t want to criticize, but I mean, come on!] you had to put Pig in that last part of it and ruined the whole concept of the story! I feel so used now! |
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| Reviewer: bennedetto | Date: 2006-04-09 |
| Reviewid: 141786 | Chapter: 1 |
That made me so sad, but the end made me happy /and/ sad at the same time...somehow. I dunno how. o.o But it happened, believe me.
I'm just wondering now how it was Pig saved Ron's life...? If you've got an explanation, I would be delighted to hear it.
Fantastic piece of work. Just...fantastic.
Peace forever
bennedetto |
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| Reviewer: Emerika | Date: 2006-03-25 |
| Reviewid: 141329 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow. I cant see the letters on the keyboard because im crying. But you ended it very well. This was perfect. I love it. |
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| Reviewer: mary ellis | Date: 2006-03-25 |
| Reviewid: 141323 | Chapter: 1 |
I know I read this when it was in process, but you've tightened it up perfectly. I even like the ending though I had initially disagreed with you on including it, as being a secondary climax. I think the fact that you trimmed the whole story made it work.
And you really snuck Harry's death in on us nicely. After reading 'Watching', I knew to expect a surprise ending from you. You are quickly becoming the Agatha Christie and M. Knight Shyamalan of fan-fic. |
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| Reviewer: Birgit | Date: 2006-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 138977 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow, I'm impressed. This is absolutely great. Maybe the most brilliant thing about it is the summary: from the moment I read the summary, I was curious who it referred to, and that curiosity kept me hooked. It made me wonder with every line I read, and it made me eager to read on and discover the answer to this mystery. And of course, the answer was a total surprise -- I don't think anyone who reads this story guesses right.
This is very well written. Not just because of the Pig-mystery, or the other mystery (who the "I" is) but also because in such a short story, you bring an entire world alive. These small bits about all those dead people tell an entire story that someone else might just write a 87-chapter story about. But now this 87-chapter story is alive in my head, just because what you wrote in this short one-shot. |
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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2006-01-26 |
| Reviewid: 138912 | Chapter: 1 |
This was really sad, but I liked the end. A little moment of humour, in it's way "my hero"- very sweet. I thought the narrator was Harry at first and felt so bad for him when I heard Ginny died - not that it isn't equally as bad losing a sister but Ginny is Harry's future- I was almost glad that Harry was dead and Ron was alive- it seemed more right.
I thought all the epitaphs you gave were very fitting, and just generally this was well written. Good job! |
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