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Review(s): 7
| Reviewer: piggypig144 | Date: 2007-08-16 |
| Reviewid: 148869 | Chapter: 1 |
| good, i liked the ending a lot. you did actions really well, all you need to do is add a little bit more appearance in there. |
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| Reviewer: xMarauderx | Date: 2007-01-21 |
| Reviewid: 146940 | Chapter: 1 |
| Woah...that was really amazing. It makes me miss Dumbledore even more! It was nice to see Dung ress up as Dumbledore and finally getting the teachers out of their stupor albeit unintentionally. Very nice. |
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| Reviewer: Angelina Weasley | Date: 2006-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 138994 | Chapter: 1 |
*cries*
Oh, I miss him even more now that I've read this..
I honestly cannot believe Mundungus, though. Minerva was ready to KEEL him.
"The hour passed quickly, and no one noticed as Albus faded away agin, leaving only Dung in his place."
Sniff. |
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| Reviewer: moonette | Date: 2006-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 138957 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh wendelin, I'm so glad you finally got this story posted. You are a very talented writer. There is an energy to your characters that makes them so real. Each one here had a unique voice and spot on characterization. The imagery is vivid and with just enough detail that helps the reader get lost in your world for a moment. And the concept was wonderfully original. I loved it! |
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| Reviewer: birdsong | Date: 2006-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 138937 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was very good! You captured everyone's personality in how they reacted. And having Dung be Albus! Again, very good! |
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| Reviewer: MrRobertsIII | Date: 2006-01-26 |
| Reviewid: 138908 | Chapter: 1 |
| Sweet and sad. Nicely done. Good to see Dung used well. I don't see him in many fics. Any chance you'll do another? |
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