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Review(s): 4
| Reviewer: beck77 | Date: 2006-01-30 |
| Reviewid: 139038 | Chapter: 1 |
| I went through the whole registration process with the Sugar Quill JUST so I could tell you how great I think your story is! I was tickled to read about the magical world from a muggle's point of view. It was well-written, intelligent, and FUN! I liked your Steve character. I liked Hermione's parents. I wish we'd see more of this kind of vingette from J.K. herself-- but since that isn't likely, I'll come to you for my fix. Way to go! |
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| Reviewer: dsmurf | Date: 2006-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 138987 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love this- very thoughtful, very cute without being too cute. I love the relationship you have between Steve and Hermione- it isn't condescending and it doesn't seem forced (the writing, I mean). I also really like that you made Hermione intelligent and curious without her being snotty about it, which I think is hard for a lot of writers to do. Thank you for sharing it! |
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| Reviewer: Mirlda | Date: 2006-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 138986 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love the point of view of someone not related to Hermione. Actually, I don't even think I've read a story from the point of view of anyone but Hermione before. Very interesting. Great job! |
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