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Review(s): 10
| Reviewer: philotic_net | Date: 2007-05-09 |
| Reviewid: 147970 | Chapter: 1 |
I totally enjoyed this story. The "I like your...[insert feature]" conversation was very sweet. Ah, young love. :) I also liked Ginny's little "not your girlfriend" tantrum. It is totally something I could see myself doing in highschool. Not actually angry, but its fun to ruffle a boys hair. :) And so clever that Harry Potter with the "Can I be your boyfriend?" line. Perfect. Gotta love him.
Great job! (Write more, your stories are fun!) |
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| Reviewer: Starsea | Date: 2006-02-12 |
| Reviewid: 139713 | Chapter: 1 |
Very good, I love how comfortable Harry feels, that he cares enough to make the effort; I'm sure Ginny recognises the effort he makes, it's not often Harry tries to put his feelings into words. :) And the motif of the window seat makes me smile. ;)
xxx~Starsea~xxx |
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| Reviewer: Felix Felicis | Date: 2006-02-11 |
| Reviewid: 139651 | Chapter: 1 |
| Girls... huh. Yeah, that sounds about right, they just don't get it. Poor Harry! Nice little fic, makes me wish for more rainy afternoons to just sit in the window seat with someone special! |
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| Reviewer: corvidae | Date: 2006-02-09 |
| Reviewid: 139583 | Chapter: 1 |
| why is it so important to label a relationship? i'm with harry on this one ginny's over reacting |
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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2006-02-09 |
| Reviewid: 139566 | Chapter: 1 |
| I really liked this- it's lovely to see them both so happy and just enjoying each others company. The whole "I like your_" part was very well done. It's the kind of thing lovers say to each other which should sound totally inane but isn't. The sudden change of mood, and Ginny's outburst of resentment was rather startling- and a little jarring, I found but still I think it was in character for the Ginny we saw in HBP. Nice fic, keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: Miss Gypsy | Date: 2006-02-09 |
| Reviewid: 139553 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aw. Adorable. I love Harry's naivety when it comes to the opposite sex. He's just so befuddled! :) |
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