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| Reviewer: MadHatterLovesGinny | Date: 2006-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 143774 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was a great story. I normally don't like plain descriptions, but that was just as good and better than stories I've read with too much dialouge. I especially liked that Hermione and Ron finally admit there feelings, without speaking a word. Like a mutual understanding. Standing ovation, and much applause. Keep up the awesome work! |
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| Reviewer: Felix Felicis | Date: 2006-02-11 |
| Reviewid: 139656 | Chapter: 1 |
| Well, the first word that comes to my mind is: balanced. I really like how you gave equal time to both couples, it makes everyone happy! Now, about the description, I really liked it. I'm not sure why you have concerns about your abilities there. It gave a full and robust picture, of surroundings as well as feelings, without going overboard and boring the reader. It was enough for me to get emotionall involved without being distracted by words. Well written. Keep up the good work. |
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