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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: The Portrait
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: MyKarmaRanOverMyDogmaDate: 2006-07-04
Reviewid: 143939Chapter: 1
Well, I can't say that I can see Hermione as an artist, mainly because she's too practical for the creative aspect in art, but I liked this little bit of fluff. It made me smile. :)

Reviewer: discordant_harmonyDate: 2006-03-12
Reviewid: 140852Chapter: 1
Awwww! It's so cute!!

I love Hermione's thoughts, especially the lower lip thing, because I know I have had thoughts similar to that. Ron seems to have finally come around in this fic. Hmmm, and we all know what a git he is.

*high five on cute fluffness*

Reviewer: Grim LupineDate: 2006-02-14
Reviewid: 139838Chapter: 1
Sadly, there's no more. Sorry! This is just a one-shot.

...If I have time, though, I might write a companion piece.

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-02-14
Reviewid: 139816Chapter: 1
Nice

Reviewer: love2danceDate: 2006-02-13
Reviewid: 139780Chapter: 1
Aaaaaaaaaagh!!!!!!!!!!!! There has to be more...much more...much much more...please? Come on!!!

Reviewer: dogstarDate: 2006-02-12
Reviewid: 139720Chapter: 1
Not entirely convinced by Hermione as an artist but the characterisation is good, so it works well enough for a short piece like this. I really liked it not mattering that she couldn't see the photo "because if she closed her eyes tightly she found that he was already, firmly in her head". I also thought her imagination working overtime about what it would be like to touch him and then getting embarrassed was very Hermione. Sweet.

Reviewer: Katie BiliusDate: 2006-02-11
Reviewid: 139673Chapter: 1
This is a very well written little H/R fic. I like the ending a lot and your idea that Hermione is an artist is doubtful but not unplausable. I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the great work!

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