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Review(s): 10
| Reviewer: jynx67 | Date: 2006-03-23 |
| Reviewid: 141246 | Chapter: 1 |
This is a brilliantly written little viginette. I really like it and you portratyed everyone wonderfully.<br><br>
<i>Then Ron said, suddenly and a bit too loudly, "Can I have your autograph?" </i><br><br>
That was my favorite line. So appropriate and the timing was excellent. |
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| Reviewer: Sannali aka Morwen | Date: 2006-03-21 |
| Reviewid: 141178 | Chapter: 1 |
| When I posted this story, I totally forgot to put in an Author's Note thanking my beta, Mysterious Muggle, with whom I am delighted to be working. So here it is. :) |
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| Reviewer: mary ellis | Date: 2006-02-18 |
| Reviewid: 140007 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hmmm--okay. Well written and all that, but basically just a rehash. No insights into Viktor's character or feelings of ambivalence for Hermione. |
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| Reviewer: AllyLovesHP | Date: 2006-02-16 |
| Reviewid: 139936 | Chapter: 1 |
| wow. i really liked this! with all the irony and missing moments..it was very well written! |
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| Reviewer: prplhez8 | Date: 2006-02-16 |
| Reviewid: 139920 | Chapter: 1 |
SAM ~
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! This is such a cute moment between Viktor and Hermione...I keep not wanting to like him, but I read stories like this that make him such a likeable creature...thanks so much for sharing your writing...it was lurvely!
~Hez |
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| Reviewer: Kelleypen | Date: 2006-02-15 |
| Reviewid: 139861 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is a lovely missing moment. And probably just the way it happened. OF course, You now have to write the Yule Ball and Valentine's in the Library kisses. You can't just leave it there. ;) |
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