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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: The Letter
Review(s): 2

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-02-20
Reviewid: 140094Chapter: 1
Sorry, maybe next time. But - J. K. Rowling is the winner by a mile.

Reviewer: mary ellisDate: 2006-02-18
Reviewid: 140003Chapter: 1
I really like this concept, and I very much like the first part, especially the way you managed to work incidents from JKR' original version into your own (The Great Humberto, etc.) But from the time Hagrid arrives, the dialog at least becomes a rehash (practically word-for-word) of the original, so I just skimmed it.

From the first part of your story, I can tell that you're capable of doing much more exciting, original work. Good luck!

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