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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 3

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-12-18
Reviewid: 146494Chapter: 1
More Please.
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Reviewer: dogstarDate: 2006-03-07
Reviewid: 140673Chapter: 1
This is a good first chapter. I'll be interested to see what happens next and how Aurora feels about what she has done. I liked the bit where she realises that she is a good actress - I have a feeling this may be important later on ...
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Reviewer: MagicdustDate: 2006-03-03
Reviewid: 140451Chapter: 1
Interesting. Sounds similar to a old tale I heard once.

Ah, this is good. Only a couple tiny suggestions: Make the font a little smaller, when you start a spacing patteren, stick with it and possibly add some more imagery and description.

Good start.
Cheers
*Magic*
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